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 Jul 8 09, 17:42
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 Babylonian  Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty  |
Been critiquing the haikus and sewnuru's of others...so felt I should give everyone a shot at one of mine:
Quiet
The morning despairs... silence across the table... a still death of love. ace |
  
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Jul 28 09, 09:20
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Hi Ace,
I believe haiku is a very visual art form that allows the reader to feel a certain emotion because of the picture the ku is giving. On reading it the reader then can say aha I can see, feel that. If one thinks about the fragment and phrase of a haiku eg. morning across the table eyes full of rain here without mentioning an emotion the reader then makes their own interpretation. For such a short form, I think there are more rules for haiku than any other :( big sighs here I did enjoy you ku and it certainly started my brain working overtime..haven't written one for ages.. take care Alice |
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ace Quiet Jul 8 09, 17:42 
Marc-Andre Germain Hi Ace,
You've captured a moment, and it... Jul 8 09, 21:56 prerna bala yeah, i think the haiku of yours captures the mome... Jul 22 09, 05:30 Arnfinn G'day, Mate.
The morning despairs; >... Jul 27 09, 07:56 Cleo_Serapis Hi Ace,
I'm still trying to learn these short... Jul 28 09, 20:00 Psyche Hi ace!
How strange it is that different line... Jul 31 09, 22:31 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Ace,
The problem with senryus is that what... Aug 1 09, 07:28 Psyche I absolutely agree with Peggy about the punctuatio... Aug 1 09, 13:00 
ace Peggy * Syl:
You are both completely correct. ... Aug 1 09, 16:35 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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