Leo, thanks for taking the time again. I certainly don't want to drive readers away, especially ones as astute as you seem to be. At the same time, I didn't want to put in an explanatory note because I feel a poem should be able to stand on its own, since that is how it would be published. Obviously I still have a way to go with this piece. Thanks again for your critiques. You've given me plenty to think about.
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