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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
 Jan 29 09, 20:56
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I will pour the tea
drink carefully it is hot it tastes bittersweet. |
  
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| Guest_ohsteve_* |
Feb 16 09, 10:54
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Leo, Thanks for reading, no problem on the personal message, I figured you hadn't quite got the rules straight. As for my poem, it is not Haiku it is senyru and it was supposed to be 5-7-5 I missed a syllable in the second line by the contraction of "it is" to 'it's' have changed that. Yes, Snow stated that she has seen two forms of Haiku although I have not. The difference between Haiku and Senyru is that Haiku usually is referenced to a season or nature where as Senyru deals with all else. The two, two, one rule applies to all critique formats Not just Shogun's. Just remember two days, two critiques, one post. LOL. PS I am not an expert in haiku or Senyru, I just write and post...lol.
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ohsteve Tea Jan 29 09, 20:56 
Sekhmet Hello Steve - Thank you for your Email, explaining... Feb 16 09, 04:48 
Eisa QUOTE (ohsteve @ Feb 16 09, 15:54 ) Leo, ... Feb 17 09, 11:18 ohsteve Snow thanks for popping in, I didn't know thos... Feb 18 09, 18:50 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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