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 Assyrian  Posts: 273 Joined: 21-July 07 From: somewhere twixt 'n' tween Member No.: 456 Real Name: Sam Richmond Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:N/A  |
There once was a lass from Connnecticut
Whose charms she kept wrapped in her petticoat Til along came a man With a slow roving hand Now where is Connecticut's etiquette? ·······  ······· Values are to integrity as spirit to spirituality ... the one is needed that the other is sustained ~ Sam
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Oct 9 08, 06:30
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 Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 783 Joined: 24-July 07 From: South Africa Member No.: 457 Real Name: Walter Schwim Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Mistral |
Good one Sam, in the true spirit of the limerick wich started as a dirty ditty. Only one nit for me, there seems to be an extra syllable in L2 but otherwise great.
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4rum The Limerist Nov 25 07, 22:56 
Cleo_Serapis Too funny - - if I had to make a nit Sam, it woul... Nov 26 07, 19:11 4rum High School Lit. was in 1966-67. Mizz Hazel (Hazel... Nov 26 07, 19:21 Eisa Hi Sam - this is one of the funniest limmericks I... Jan 10 08, 05:32 
4rum Heeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyy ... no fair ! ! ... Jan 10 08, 05:55 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi,
I agree that this is just "too funny... Jun 30 08, 14:32 4rum There was a sweet lass from Vir-gin-i-a
Who scrivi... Oct 6 08, 14:09 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Thank you, Sam!! I'm thrilled!... Oct 6 08, 15:43 ohsteve Sam, I was taught the same rules in high school 64... Oct 6 08, 19:33 4rum Hi Peggy;
Glad you liked the little limerick. T... Oct 7 08, 00:42 4rum 'lo Steve;
I probably have more respect and... Oct 7 08, 01:14 4rum Thanks Thoth;
Could be a regional thing with pr... Oct 10 08, 03:55 prerna bala oh, weeeeeee!
that was great, i mean the lmrk... Jan 13 09, 06:57 ohsteve Sam, somehow I forgot to come back and say your we... Jan 13 09, 14:19 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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