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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Free Verse Poetry for Critique -> Seren's Synapse _ Towards perfection

Posted by: greenwich Apr 6 17, 03:09

Hearty is the song of the brave.
Virtue the blacksmiths lock.
All men are angels,
only looking for a true cause.
Refined should be their energy
Steadfast in their wisdom.

Posted by: Eisa Apr 12 17, 16:10

Hearty is the song of the brave.
Virtue the blacksmiths lock.
All men are angels,
only looking for a true cause.
Refined should be their energy
Steadfast in their wisdom.

I really like this Antony. No nits but I'm thinking on it.
Eira

Posted by: greenwich Apr 13 17, 06:36

Thank you very much