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Posted by: Athena Feb 20 04, 04:11

Posted by: Arnfinn Feb 20 04, 05:29

Good day?

Ah, a picturesque cinquain, amazing how a small stanza can have an effect of grandeur.

I hope it was worth the wait. :)  :wizard:


Arnie  :troy:

Posted by: Athena Feb 20 04, 05:32

Hi Arnie,

He's definitely worth the wait!  

Thanks for your encouraging words, so appreciated.

Always trying to learn,

Dolly  

Posted by: Aphrodite Feb 20 04, 19:42

Hello Dolly~

You have me wanting to write a cinquain. (haven't in a long while)

In your brevity, you bring passionate imagery with a strong ending.
I love the title too as it sets the stage well.    

An excellent cinquain, indeed! :pharoah2  :pharoah2

Blessings~
Lindi

Posted by: Athena Feb 21 04, 03:27

QUOTE(Athena @ Feb. 20 2004, 03:11)

Visualizing

I sit
contemplating
returning to your arms
wondering how soon it will be
hurry

© D R Harris - 19 February 2004

Hello Dolly~

You have me wanting to write a cinquain. (haven't in a long while)

In your brevity, you bring passionate imagery with a strong ending.
I love the title too as it sets the stage well.    

An excellent cinquain, indeed! :pharoah2  :pharoah2

Blessings~
Lindi

Hi Lindi.

Thank you so very much for your always welcome and encouraging comments!

Yes, why not write a cinquain?  We have the interactive thread and the regular thread or post one in the crit threads or all of the above!    :laugh:  :dance:

Why not?  I'll sure rush to read!  

Hugs,

Dolly    :pharoah:

Posted by: codger Feb 21 04, 16:46

Dolly, nice one--
Know what you mean  

Gerry.

Posted by: Athena Mar 1 04, 05:08

Dolly, nice one--
Know what you mean  

Gerry.