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Mosaic Musings...interactive poetry reviews _ Weekly Challenges -> Acropolis _ Friendship - X10 for October 31

Posted by: Larry Oct 31 17, 23:12

Friendship

“Too much to show?”, it doesn’t take
but moments to discover how
a whisper soothes the soulful ache
of friends in need and will endow
them with a smile where laughter wraps
their heart and loosens sadness’ clutch
to fall like dreams. Is this, perhaps,
too much?

Words used in order of appearance:
1. moment 2. discover 3. whisper 4. soul 5. ache 6. friend 7. laughter 8. wrap 9. fall 10. dream

Posted by: JustDaniel Nov 15 17, 11:47

Please allow me to whisper, ^{"I'm sorry for overlooking this, my friend."}

Lightening the load, Daniel

Posted by: Larry Nov 15 17, 14:27

Daniel,

Thanks for dropping in, if for nothing else than a whispered apology for tardiness. No big deal seeing as how there are we two and an occasional bit of input from a couple of others. Things are easy to overlook in these vacant halls. Lori hasn't even commented on my reply to the X10 challenge although I'm sure she has visited and read it.

Beside, what are friends for?

Larry