Spring loosens moist earth,
letting the sharpened leaf spears
stab the infant Sun
Hello, Leo.
Assassin
Spring loosens moist earth,
letting the sharpened leaf spears
stab the infant Sun
Very imaginative nature story. Has a biblical, Moses, ring about the Bullrushes (son).
I notice there are a few spears involved. Should the title be Assassins
Regards,
John
Hi John! You are absolutely right. Assassins it shall be.
Thanks, Leo
Hi Leo
I think you are getting the hang of these very quickly. I love this!!!! - and the surprise aha! in the last line is superb.
Snow
Leo, I missed this, but I thought it very well done, loved the play on words ending.
Steve
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