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Posted by: JustDaniel Jul 23 07, 09:16

minimalizing

so much wears away with time
but there's more than rhyme
with poets'
terse

appreciation
actually grows when you stop
minimalizing

© MLee Dickens'son 23 July 2007

in an unnamed minimalist form the Norm Pollack has been musing in... which I'll call for now, 'Septoling'

Posted by: Terocon101 Aug 15 07, 12:04

Hey Daniel,

Dar's wisdom in dem dare words!! It reads beautifully and looks great too.

There's nothing I can suggest except... write a few more.

Although I will say I think its the poet's job to minimalize, no matter what the form(even epics). They condense the view/emotion into words and sentences. What do you think??

Best wishes..

Posted by: Eisa Aug 30 07, 03:29

QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jul 23 07, 15:16 )

minimalizing

so much wears away with time
but there's more than rhyme
with poets'
terse

appreciation
actually grows when you stop
minimalizing

© MLee Dickens'son 23 July 2007

in an unnamed minimalist form the Norm Pollack has been musing in... which I'll call for now, 'Septoling'

I like it, Daniel! What are the rules of this form?

Snow

Posted by: JustDaniel Aug 31 07, 19:14

Thanks, Snow.

Here's the link in Karnak: http://forums.mosaicmusings.net/index.php?showtopic=11080

Lightly, Daniel