wood wee


would we

call specialist

meaty urologist

after workouts at a health spa?

and would friend be meteorologist

whether or not he’d known whether

we’d have snowy weather today?

we’d not call fat scientist

meatier-ologist

would we?


MLee Dickens’son 09 Dec 2005

Excellent poem Daniel. I imagine we all feel insecure wiht the critique process and am almost always a tad impatient...

Here's two I just wrote for this weekend's flash stimulus:

Heaven's Caress


Caress
this day and learn
my love for you has grown
beyond measure; you light my nights,
soothe my days and reaffirm commitment.
Without you by my side, surely
I’d not be this person
who yearns for your
caress


Heaven
sent you to me
on this beautiful day
when one kiss sealed our fate’s caress;
Love’s coupled desire of absolute peace.
Your smile assures me “Life is good”.
You understand my needs;
our wedded bliss -
Heaven

© Copyright Lorraine M Kanter
All rights reserved as an unpublished work

Beautiful expression, Lori, in each of these... and of course I like the fact that you've linked both words in your title. Your corporate piece reminds me of the fact that...

Thanks Daniel.

Your response is stunning as well! YOu should check out the Acropolis forum today as this was the flash challenge....

Cheers
~Cleo

Thanks, Lori... I haven't been there for ages. I was a little late, but I posted it anyhow: