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Alan
CABBAGE MAKES OFF WITH THE WORLD

With a large leap of faith,
one could imagine clusters
of emerald-green cabbage
eclipsing by right, not might,
every other strain of plant.

King Cole would play heavenly harp
and croon comforting lullabies
in some ancient ritual,
drop his coins into a well,
and wish to take over the world.

Please tell me
this is a fiction ?

Oh.

Alan McAlpine Douglas

Challenge words : leap cluster emerald
cabbage eclipse strain harp lullaby ritual

From Rhymezone
Cabbage def. noun: informal term for money
verb: make off with belongings of others
Siren
Hey Alan,

A definitely unique blend, beginning with the title... I translated this into the rise and fall of the sock market. I am not sure if my interp is right. I can't find anything I want to change...

Dani
Alan
Dear Dani,

Quite close really. Though your typo (SOCK market) does make me laugh !

The message is MONEY (cabbage) has taken over the world. No sign of the "fall" you mention.

Thanks for the visit.

Love
Alan
Siren
SOCK? and who told you it was a typo? LOL! It could be a comment on how valuable money should be. LOL Ah shucks! It is a typo.

Well no fall, but you mention King Cole's crooning and I sense a longing for times where being human meant more than being "green"

I still love the uniqueness here

dani
Alan
Dear Dani,

Spot on !

Love
Alan
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