Hi Aggie,
Very well done.
It sounds very smooth and has a mysterious quality emphasing colors with dream, scheme, and personal achievment.
I interpret that you are conciously advancing toward an unlikely aspiration (flighty dream). Note that it is singular instead of plural. Flighty could also refer to etheral. It has wings like an angel.
Blue usually denotes cold, which in this case may be reality of I know not what (heaven perhaps). The narrow path metaphor is employed in Christian religion a lot.
Yellow denotes warmth, which in this case alludes to the comforting features of your goal...maybe part of the impossible or unlikely.
I am uncertain of your weaving an impossible scheme. Scheme lends heavy connotation of personal effort and planned intention. It denotes ill intentions more than say the word plan.
I like the link between inflamed and yellow tone.
Don
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