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Aug 25 03, 17:21
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I just got a 'YES' from Michael Walker who invented this very catchy new type of poetic form called the Monotetra...WAY COOL!
Here is his definition and examples of this new form. You can find Michael's works at The Starlight Cafe: http://www.thestarlitecafe.com under the pen name: Bronze Dragon..... :troy: :vic: :pharoah2
"Monotetra
The monotetra consists of any number of stanzas of four lines each. Each stanza contains a monorhyme, so that the pattern of the stanzas would be “aaaa bbbb cccc” and so on… this is where the “mono” in the name of the form comes in.
The “tetra” in the name of the form is because each line of each stanza is written in tetrameter – to those who hate metrical feet and such, this simply means that each line has eight (8) syllables. There is no need for “iambs” here…
The other aspect of the monotetra is that the fourth line of each stanza is a repeating four-syllable phrase. It does not have to be an EXACT repetition, but close. Sound simple? Here’s an example stanza…
The monotetra’s catching fast But how long will its allure last? Who knows! The future’s wide and vast So like the past, so like the past… "...
Here is another example of Michaels;
Song for Solace
'Tis moonlight dim upon the sky As shadows play across my eye, When oft these memories I spy – That pass me by, they pass me by...
The creak of wood in unused halls Reminding of long-past footfalls, As to our bed you'd quickly crawl – In fright and all, in fright and all...
These nights I often hear the sound Of silent footsteps on the grounds. Although I know no one's around – I wander out, still wander out…
Oh yes, this neighborhood has changed It’s denizens quite rearranged, And every neighbor seems estranged – How times will change, how fast they change…
Not long before, I thought not twice To leave a window ope at night – To grant you leave to ride your bike Alone at night, alone that night…
I know the blame is not my own And sinners reap what they have sown, But thoughts help not when I’m alone – I should have known, I should have known…
‘Tis moonlight dim upon the sky Your face – imprinted on my mind It’s now I know I have to try To say goodbye, to say goodbye…
Thanks Michael!
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Cleo_Serapis Monotetra - a NEW form Aug 25 03, 17:21 Cleo_Serapis The Iceberg and the Volcano
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She loves to... Aug 25 03, 17:27 Charon Cleo,
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not even... Aug 25 03, 20:53 Thank you for sharing my form with your community ... Aug 26 03, 08:35 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Atila The Hun @ Aug. 25 2003, 20:58)Cl... Aug 26 03, 20:25 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Zeus² @ Aug. 25 2003, 21:53)Family Tri... Aug 26 03, 20:26 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (BronzeDragon @ Aug. 26 2003, 09:35)Tha... Aug 26 03, 20:28 Dear Cleo and Michael
Michael, this form is delig... Oct 3 03, 03:47 Jox Alan, a brilliant effort! (You didn't use ... Oct 3 03, 03:57 Dear Jox
I'm gonna have to stop posting if al... Oct 3 03, 04:29 Jox I would hate to stop you posting Alan but with tho... Oct 3 03, 06:30 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 03 2003, 04:47)Dear Cleo a... Oct 4 03, 16:42 Dear Cleo
Thank you very much ! I loved doing... Oct 4 03, 18:56 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Alan @ Oct. 04 2003, 19:56)Dear Cleo
... Oct 5 03, 07:03 Alan - your monotetra was excellent! I l... Oct 25 03, 06:12 Dear Michael
Now that I have checked the members ... Oct 25 03, 19:16 VICE
There's nothing aglow, not even moon lig... Mar 14 04, 19:54 Cleo_Serapis Glistened Glee
Their nights of ice call to embrac... May 2 04, 16:12 JustDaniel I haven’t time to do justice
to such a form as thi... Jun 11 04, 06:31 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Just Daniel @ June 11 2004, 07:31)I ha... Jun 12 04, 07:42 Cathy I wrote this poem for my son, Anthony
Precious Me... Nov 13 04, 00:17 JustDaniel Grace Oh’s Us Art
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wit... Jan 8 07, 18:09 Larry A Musing Form
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Would that those who had come to pen
th... Dec 14 17, 16:37 Larry Harried Christmas
As Twenty-Seventeen winds down
... Dec 28 17, 09:21 JustDaniel An Egg's Crack
You have a knack with that old... Jan 7 18, 09:13 Larry A Long Goodbye
Why can’t the world view what I s... Jan 7 18, 22:52 JustDaniel ERRATA
I can't believe I erred again
and blot... Jan 8 18, 00:12 JustDaniel Airing more Errors
Oh my! I've screwed it... Jan 8 18, 00:32 Larry Just Human
Although we’re human, as it were
and w... Jan 8 18, 17:27
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